Saturday, November 10, 2012

Jaws Returns

By David and Matthew

Once upon a time there was mega jaws. He was swimming in the ocean. Someone was swimming and all of a sudden someone yelled “shark”! “shark”! Everyone was running and screaming and trying to get out of the water. Then all of a sudden help th!! Jaws had just took someone under the water and seriously injured them, but a bullet hit jaws. And the person was saved and recovered. His blood pressure went from 70/40-normal blood pressure in 1 day. 

But that was not the last of the 35 foot long shark, he is still out there. Then, Jaws attacked a boat that was fastly swimming in the ocean, and flipped it over. Everybody fell out of the boat and started scrambling to get away from jaws, but jaws came and started to go around eating everybody, he got everybody but 1 person. Then he put a liquid helium tank in Jaws mouth and fired at it. On the 9th shot they blew him up and that was the end of Jaws. 

Jaws was finally dead. He will not be coming back for a while. The end so they thought, that was just jaws son, the real problem was his Dad, the biggest great white shark on the planet. He was 60 feet long. Then he fed Jaws dad a big fish, but jaws jumped at the man and ate two men. Then jaws dad swam off. He was very mad. Then they blew jaws dad up. They had used a huge gun that shot giant bullets, and jaws had blown in half and out popped a baby shark that swam away. Someone yelled “Shoot” Then they took the gun and shot the baby fish and it exploded. The end. That was the last of jaws for a long time.


Epilouge

It was 5 years later and there had been no more big sharks like jaws, but there were a bunch of divers swimming in the ocean, having a peaceful day, then a big pack of bull sharks came. One was 40 feet long. They came and started to attack the people. One of the people was the man who killed the last shark. He survived because a dolphin came and he got on it and rode it back to shore. He knew that there was a big pack of mean bull sharks out there, and he had to destroy them. He told his friends “Lets get some weapons and kill the bull sharks” So then they went to a weapon shop. 

They chose the strongest guns they had. Then they went out and got a moter boat. So the man and his friends got on the boat and went out to sea. They went out to the spot where he found the bull sharks. Before they got there they loaded up the guns with 25 bullets. Then they found the bull sharks. The man who killed the last great white sharks name was Ronald Parker. He aimed his gun at a bull shark and fired the gun 2 times. It killed the shark, but the other sharks were now aware of their presence. 

The bull sharks started to attack the boat, so the men shot rapidly. At the end of all the shooting there were still 3 bull sharks left and only 2 men left, and the boat was not in good condition. 

Ronald only had 3 bullets left, but his friend had 5 bullets left. One of the sharks jumped on the boat and ate his friend. But he did not get the gun. Ronald was the only one left. He took his friends gun and shot at the sharks. 2 more sharks died and he only had 2 bullets left. He shot at the shark. He missed the first time, but he hit him the 2nd time. 

The shark was not quite dead, and he was out of bullets so he started to hit the shark with his gun, and he hit it enough times that the bull shark died. It was the end of the killer sharks.

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